Friday Fictioneers – Attention


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Photo by Krista Strutz

It takes all my attention

to stay on the board

and avoid water traffic.

It also takes my board



That shadow stretching over me

Providing welcome shade

Is not a friendly cloud.

It turns out to be

A motherfucker freighter

Making mincemeat out of me. [47 words]

Thank you Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for continuing to set this 100 word or less challenge. It is a commitment appreciated by many. Other 100 word stories can be read here.

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