RANDOM THOUGHTS by Trish

… not necessarily sane

Friday Fictioneers – Sensory Explosion

Posted on 19/08/2020 by trishsplace

Photo Prompt by ted-strutz

Photo by Ted Strutz

Anne Rice, New Orleans, Louisiana, the Vampire Chronicles; Lestat.

Is this house even in Louisiana; even in the States?

Rarefied living; or haunted house.

Family home; or abandoned derelict.

Pet cemetery in the backyard; or bones of generations past.

What do you think as you pass by?

Eyes to the pavement, feet pushing through leaves; dropped blooms.

Do you look up and wonder, as do I?

Sniff the air; peek through windows; peer over the fence.

Rattle a fence post; kick at the base.

Shake the tree to drop leaves in your face.

Sensory explosion! (95 words)
Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a story in response to a photo prompt – in 100 words or less. You can find other stories here.

18 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Sensory Explosion”

Geri Lawhon on 21/12/2020 at 10:11 am said:

You can check in, but you cannot check out.

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Dale on 25/08/2020 at 2:08 pm said:

You had me at Anne Rice…

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Bill on 23/08/2020 at 6:20 am said:

Interesting approach. Well done.

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Dora on 22/08/2020 at 5:59 am said:

House of horror or family home? Just the sort of thoughts you’d have walking past a house like this. Hope it’s the latter 🙂

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rochellewisoff on 21/08/2020 at 9:09 pm said:

Dear Trish,

The house fires the imagination, doesn’t it? Love this piece. Well done.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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- trishsplace on 21/08/2020 at 9:48 pm said:
  
  Thanks Rochelle! 😁
  
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Tannille on 21/08/2020 at 5:06 pm said:

A saw Anne Rice and Stephen King when the prompt flashed up. Enjoyed this.

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siobhan1967 on 21/08/2020 at 9:16 am said:

It does look like a house that would have a pet cemetery! Lovely piece of writing.

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- trishsplace on 21/08/2020 at 10:16 am said:
  
  It does 😱 Perfect for a Stephen King novel.
  
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Sandra on 20/08/2020 at 8:25 pm said:

I wondered why you were so far down the list. 🙂 With an excellent story too.

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- trishsplace on 20/08/2020 at 10:25 pm said:
  
  Thank you, oh Queen. 😃
  
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neilmacdon on 20/08/2020 at 7:45 pm said:

A lovely stream of consciousness, Trish

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- trishsplace on 20/08/2020 at 8:20 pm said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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Iain Kelly on 20/08/2020 at 7:44 pm said:

Excellent work Trish, so many mystery’s could be wrapped up in the house. I hope they are happy ones!

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- trishsplace on 20/08/2020 at 8:19 pm said:
  
  Thanks Iain. 😉
  
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draliman on 20/08/2020 at 5:00 pm said:

It could well be a wonderful place – it’s hard to tell without full colour!

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doodletllc on 20/08/2020 at 10:50 am said:

Beautiful!

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trishsplace on 20/08/2020 at 10:04 am said:

I just realised I hadn’t added myself to the party! I’m bummed. I was going to be 3rd or 4th 🤣

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